Proof read my autobiographical essay PLEASE?

I can tell you did not proof read this. I appreciate the story, however, the entire writing is full of run on sentences, bad grammar and punctuation. Even in the first paragraph, you are not informative of whom you're talking about. ex. you mention your parents...what are their names? What reference do they have pertaining to this tale? Semi colons are mis-used etc. The story ends abruptly. Bad move for a 'writer'. Remember this: All good writers re-write their work several times. Proof read!!